Love it! I have cried all month since I started writing and sharing my stories and yet I truly feel as though I am starting to heal. Maybe it’s that enough time has past but your line about breaking before healing resonates with me as well.
This is a fantastic use of colour to hold the entire piece together, it flowed to me like a red velvet scarf slowly slipping and dropping to the floor. Thank you for sharing this piece.
This is too good sam!!! The way your words made me feel the pain, It's way too beautiful and heartbreaking though. Glad that at least you can express them in words 🤍 hoping fot the bestttt
Oh sam i want to say its so beautifully written but i can feel the pain through the shattered words..I can understand you are in pain but turn the pain in to words like this.. It will try to wet the flame slowly...
u have a remarkable gift for articulating the heavy, complex nuances of sorrow. it takes a lot of vulnerability and skill to write something that feels this raw yet remains so exquisitely crafted💗🩷
woah sam. i never have words for ur poetry. it’s so well written. thank you really for sharing this with us. 🫶
i love the fact here that when we’re sad, we’re usually painted blue. here, not. it’s red. the color of anger, blood, but also of passion — such a contradictory color that seems to burn from the inside.
I'm truly glad that u could picture it in that way, blue has been my forever favourite shade but red just evokes a different feeling. Thank you so muchhh for reading,it means a lottt<3
the emotion comes through so beautifully, there's a richness of color woven through every line. beautiful work<3
Thank you so muchhh
Love it! I have cried all month since I started writing and sharing my stories and yet I truly feel as though I am starting to heal. Maybe it’s that enough time has past but your line about breaking before healing resonates with me as well.
I'm glad u found it resonating,thank you for reading
This is a fantastic use of colour to hold the entire piece together, it flowed to me like a red velvet scarf slowly slipping and dropping to the floor. Thank you for sharing this piece.
Thank you so much for reading,it means a lottt
Thank you for sharing. It’s my pleasure to read.
This is too good sam!!! The way your words made me feel the pain, It's way too beautiful and heartbreaking though. Glad that at least you can express them in words 🤍 hoping fot the bestttt
Thank you so muchhh,I'm glad that u could feel something reading this .
Babe this is soooo good, so sorry for reading this veryy late!!
I loved it when you said 'sorrow demanded a language of its own.'
Thank you so muchh sweetie,it means a lott🤍✨
Oh sam i want to say its so beautifully written but i can feel the pain through the shattered words..I can understand you are in pain but turn the pain in to words like this.. It will try to wet the flame slowly...
Great work sam🌸
Thank you so much for your kind words Jasla,it means a lott🤍
Alwayys🌸
u have a remarkable gift for articulating the heavy, complex nuances of sorrow. it takes a lot of vulnerability and skill to write something that feels this raw yet remains so exquisitely crafted💗🩷
Thank you so so muchhh🤍
This is so well written!!! Sooo amazing!! I felt every line, every pain. 🫶🏻
Thank you so much,it means a lottt
The symbolism of red is unforgettable; this piece leaves a lasting impression. ❤️
I'm glad it did, thank you for reading
Sure ❤️
Thanks for sharing.
I picture a bath. I see the sadness in their eyes. And the red mingling with the paling of skin.
I'm glad u could picture all these. Thank you so muchhh for reading.
Visually. I have that capacity to see. My pleasure.
woah sam. i never have words for ur poetry. it’s so well written. thank you really for sharing this with us. 🫶
i love the fact here that when we’re sad, we’re usually painted blue. here, not. it’s red. the color of anger, blood, but also of passion — such a contradictory color that seems to burn from the inside.
also. “it flowed down her wrists”. ow. my heart.
I'm truly glad that u could picture it in that way, blue has been my forever favourite shade but red just evokes a different feeling. Thank you so muchhh for reading,it means a lottt<3
When pain is expressed with so much beauty it almost stings more. Well written.
Thank you so muchh,it means a lottt