this is beautiful! i’ve never been in a relationship or experienced this, but this poem has this magic that just makes you feel all the right things. keep writing! <3
Thats so heartbreaking, Sam. While I was reading, I was like "You better leave that person" and you answered me in the last line. I'm proud of you for choosing yourself, Sam! 😊🫂 what a devastatingly beautiful poem ✨️
I read many breakup stories today and then this 😭, I have never been in a relationship. Now i think I shouldn't be fs 😭
Your words are like a flow of water in a calm and clear river flowing across plateau.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing 💫
Just highlighting this part
You watched me drown whilst calling it the tide; I mistook your absence for love disguised.
You left me with fake promises you made, whilst every truth beneath your smile decayed.
I'm feeling every bit of the pain
Really beautiful imagery
this is beautiful! i’ve never been in a relationship or experienced this, but this poem has this magic that just makes you feel all the right things. keep writing! <3
Thats so heartbreaking, Sam. While I was reading, I was like "You better leave that person" and you answered me in the last line. I'm proud of you for choosing yourself, Sam! 😊🫂 what a devastatingly beautiful poem ✨️
"I stood beneath my abandoned stars" this is soo good. I also loved the velvet motif. Nice poem!
I think, after every line, my heart skipped a beat. I felt this.